With "Glitches and Kisses," Grafton Carter proves his writing chops, that his first novel wasnโt a flash in the pan. Carter is here to stay, and not a moment too soon! He brings the authenticity of gay male experience to the MM Romance genre. He also brings a keen understanding of human nature.
"Glitches and Kisses" introduces us to Evan and Noah, both of whom are lovingly relatable in their flaws. Evan knows what he wants: Noah, relationship, picket fence, etc. And, like so many of us in that situation have done, Evan has a script in his head for how that relationship should look, how the parties should act towards each other, and whether the gate on that future picket fence should swing in or out.
Even when Evan tries to self-correct and reign in his expectations, to allow things to develop more organically, he just retreats to familiar ground, still scripting. Here he is complaining to Noah: โI just want to know what is ours. What is ours thatโs different from Sam? From Liam? From Elliott? You can sleep in their beds, and nothing happens but sleep. You can take them to dinner. You can watch action films and argue with them.โ His voice dropped to almost a whisper. โWhat is different about us?โ
What Noah wants is not to be hurt again, which causes him to push people away in a subconscious effort to slow things down. Hereโs Noah reflecting on things: โIโd spent so long convincing myself that if I didnโt define what we were, I wouldnโt have to lose him. That as long as I kept everything contained, controlled, unnamed, it wouldnโt become something that could hurt me when it inevitably fell apart.โ
Who hasnโt been an Evan? Who hasnโt been Noah? Iโve been both, which is maybe part of the reason I found this story so enjoyable. These were real characters with relatable issues.
Beyond the relatability, though, is the writing, which shines in the two examples cited above and throughout the book. Whether Carter is describing the fictional city of Havenwood, with its nearby rafting excursions; detailing a sumptuous restaurant meal; or giving us a dance scene at a gay bar, one feels the river spray, smells the garlic in the Italian food, and hears the loud music and laughter in the bar.
Carter also delivers the heat. I liked this beginning to one scene: โClothes became a problem fast. His shirt, gone. Mine, somewhere. I didnโt care. I needed more of him, needed to feel him, needed to get rid of whatever space was left between us.โ I say โbeginning to one scene,โ because it is just that, a full-on experience. Slow burn only works when thereโs enough scorch to justify the slow parts.
"Glitches and Kisses" scorches. Youโll need oven mitts for this one!
Thanks to Grafton Carter for a free copy of this book. This is my honest review.